[278] in Kakapo Windows Team
Update on Windows Server pages
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Kris Nyzio)
Fri Jan 16 13:00:32 2004
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Date: Fri, 16 Jan 2004 13:00:28 -0500
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From: Kris Nyzio <knyzio@MIT.EDU>
Cc: pismere-team@mit.edu, kakapo@mit.edu, isweb <isweb@mit.edu>
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Hi Tom,
The set of Windows Server pages have been reviewed and updated. The
exceptions are the forms located here:
http://web.mit.edu/is/topics/windows/server/cr/ and
here: http://web.mit.edu/is/topics/windows/server/request_forms/cr/
Upon quick inspection, both sets of forms appear very similar. I
have feedback on them, but I'd like to know which set should be
reviewed. Please let me know and I'll have recommendations for you
early next week.
Otherwise, the list of pages reviewed and updated is as follows, with
questions embedded in the list (marked with an asterix). All files
can be found in the dontindex space,
https://web.mit.edu/is/dontindex/server/ .
General updates to all (or most) pages:
-Added last modified date, description/author/keyword meta tags to html head.
-Updated footer.
-Added left-column navigation back to the main Windows Server page on
all sub-pages.
-Spellchecked all pages.
I'll be leaving at 3 today, so if I don't hear back from you before
then, enjoy the long weekend and I'll look forward to hearing from
you once you've had time to take a look at the work that has been
done so far.
Kris
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SERVER root
backup.html
*deciding_factors.html - there is a link on the page titled
"unsupported Windows operating system that links to a page of
supported operating systems. I assumed the link title should be
changed to "supported" so I did that but wanted to be sure to let you
know.
essential_tasks.html
general_recommendations.html
*group_policy_intro.html - the "tone" of some of the underlined text
could probably be softened a bit. If you would like me to take a
pass at doing this, I'd be happy to do so. The rest of the content
on the page is great, so the comments in question are quite a
contrast. I'm not sure this benefits users. You might want to
consider swapping underlines for italics, since underlined text is
typically used *only* in cases of linked text.
index.html
intro_to_options.html
monitoring.html
request_forms.html
supported_network_configs.html
supported_os.html
-Subdirectories:
independent
indepdom.html
maintain.html
index.html
detailed_info.html
workgroup
index.html
winmitedu
container_info.html
detailed_info.html
extensions.html
*group_policy.html - same "tone" comment as above; also same
underline vs. italics comment.
*help.html-is it possible to get a smaller -- and more legible --
screenshot for the first image?
index.html
join.html
migration_plan.html
os_management.html
printer_driver_mappings.html
resources.html
RIS.html
security.html
software.html
user_management.html
user_profiles.html
--winmitedu subdirectories:
commands
add.html
addmenu.html
attach.html
athrun.htmll
detach.html
*fca - I wasn't sure what to do with these pages. Please let me know
if you'd like them converted and I'll do so.
add-machine-to-container.html
install-techsmith-code.html
gpsnap
gp-moira-users.html
gp-oucheck.html
gp-pismere-no-override.html
gp-pismere.html
index.html
whitepaper
*index.html - I wasn't sure what to do with this page. Please let me
know if you'd like it converted and I'll do so.
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<div>Hi Tom,</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>The set of Windows Server pages have been reviewed and updated.
The exceptions are the forms located here:
http://web.mit.edu/is/topics/windows/server/cr/ and</div>
<div>here:
http://web.mit.edu/is/topics/windows/server/request_forms/cr/</div>
<div>Upon quick inspection, both sets of forms appear very similar.
I have feedback on them, but I'd like to know which set should be
reviewed. Please let me know and I'll have recommendations for
you early next week.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>Otherwise, the list of pages reviewed and updated is as follows,
with questions embedded in the list (marked with an asterix).
All files can be found in the dontindex space,
https://web.mit.edu/is/dontindex/server/ .</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>General updates to all (or most) pages:</div>
<div>-Added last modified date, description/author/keyword meta tags
to html head.</div>
<div>-Updated footer.</div>
<div>-Added left-column navigation back to the main Windows Server
page on all sub-pages.</div>
<div>-Spellchecked all pages.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>I'll be leaving at 3 today, so if I don't hear back from you
before then, enjoy the long weekend and I'll look forward to hearing
from you once you've had time to take a look at the work that has been
done so far.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>Kris</div>
<div><br></div>
<div><br></div>
<div>------------------------------------</div>
<div><br></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><b>SERVER root</b></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">backup.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">*deciding_factors.html - there is a link on
the page titled "unsupported Windows operating system that links
to a page of supported operating systems. I assumed the link title
should be changed to "supported" so I did that but wanted to
be sure to let you know.</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">essential_tasks.html<br>
general_recommendations.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">*group_policy_intro.html - the
"tone" of some of the underlined text could probably be
softened a bit. If you would like me to take a pass at doing
this, I'd be happy to do so. The rest of the content on the page
is great, so the comments in question are quite a contrast. I'm
not sure this benefits users. You might want to consider
swapping underlines for italics, since underlined text is typically
used *only* in cases of linked text.</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">index.html<br>
intro_to_options.html<br>
monitoring.html<br>
request_forms.html<br>
supported_network_configs.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">supported_os.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><br></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">-Subdirectories:</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><br>
<b>independent</b><br>
indepdom.html<br>
maintain.html<br>
index.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">detailed_info.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><br>
<b>workgroup</b></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">index.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><br>
<b>winmitedu</b><br>
container_info.html<br>
detailed_info.html<br>
extensions.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">*group_policy.html - same "tone"
comment as above; also same underline vs. italics
comment.</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">*help.html-is it possible to get a smaller
-- and more legible -- screenshot for the first image?</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">index.html<br>
join.html<br>
migration_plan.html<br>
os_management.html<br>
printer_driver_mappings.html<br>
resources.html<br>
RIS.html<br>
security.html<br>
software.html<br>
user_management.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">user_profiles.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><br></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">--winmitedu subdirectories:</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><b>commands</b><br>
add.html<br>
addmenu.html<br>
attach.html<br>
athrun.htmll<br>
detach.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000"><b>*fca</b> - I wasn't sure what to do with
these pages. Please let me know if you'd like them converted and
I'll do so.</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">add-machine-to-container.html</font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">install-techsmith-code.html<br>
<b>gpsnap</b><br>
gp-moira-users.html<br>
gp-oucheck.html<br>
gp-pismere-no-override.html<br>
gp-pismere.html<br>
index.html<br>
<b>whitepaper</b></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000">*index.html - I wasn't sure what to do with
this page. Please let me know if you'd like it converted and
I'll do so.</font></div>
</body>
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