[89298] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: chIjwI' tIQ bom: 'ay' cha'
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Robyn Stewart)
Wed Aug 31 13:12:16 2011
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2011 10:00:51 -0700
To: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
From: Robyn Stewart <robyn@flyingstart.ca>
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At 09:43 31/08/2011, you wrote:
>mujang Qov:
> > I was tired as I was looking at this and in a few places I gave up without
> > exploring all possibilities, but at least you see where someone could be
> > confused.
>
>'ej lI'qu'. I hope I haven't implied I expect a full analysis or anything.
>The feedback you've given is great.
No you didn't imply that at all. I just wanted to make clear that
had I been fresher I might have understood things more quickly or
more fully. The exercise is very useful to me, because I learn
vocabulary and usage that I had missed or forgotten and get to
exercise my comprehension. I might do another pass on the next draft
where I try to look at meter. I don't think I'm very good at that,
though. I haven't internalized the stress rules as much as I should have.
>Qov:
> > I actually like it, and think it's likely,
>
>wa' DoS wIqIp. They're basically just {'em} and {tlhop} plus 90 degrees; I
>think it'd make perfect sense if they behaved that way, even if there's no
>supporting canon (thanks for looking that up, Voragh).
I'm currently editing my story to fix that throughout. It will be my
new practice. I will be way more comfortable with it that way. I've
always hated using poS and nIH.
