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Re: "yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv"
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU)
Sun Jan 23 13:07:39 1994
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From: FHOREIN@ALBION.Bitnet
To: "Klingon Language List" <tlhIngan-Hol@klingon.East.Sun.COM>
Date: Sun, 23 Jan 1994 13:05:36 -0500 (EST)
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Here's my newest version of "yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv".
Actually I haven't changed much, but I do recognize one
problem. Notes will be added.
maHvaD poH tu'be'lu'
maHvaD Daq tu'be'lu'
najmey tebbogh Dochvam 'oH nuq'e' 'ach maHvo' ghoStaH
(I used this method because of meter)
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
maHvaD tul tu'be'lu'
maHvaD wuqlu'ta' Hoch'a'
(notice the {-lu'})
maHvaD wa' belmoHbogh poH neH nobta' qo''a'vam'e'
(I never liked how I wrote that line anyway)
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
muSHa' rInbe'taH 'e' ngIl 'Iv
("Who dares to love forever")
HeghnISmo' Hoch
(Should be "HeghnISmo' muSHa'ghach", but there's meter...)
'ach wuSDu'maj yIHotchuqmoH
'ach qo'wIjvaD tIqlIj yIHotmoH
(I hate the above two lines. The originals were
"But touch my tears with your lips"
"Touch my wourld with your fingertips"
Any suggestions would be welcome)
'ej mayInlaH rInbe'taH
'ej mamuSHa'chuq rInbe'taH
DaHjajmaj 'oH rInbe'taHghach'e'
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
yIn rInbe'taH neHqu' 'Iv
DaHjajmaj 'oH rInbe'taHghach'e'
muSHa'meH loS 'Iv rInbe'taH
Plese report any problems. I enjoyed all of your suggestions.
veDHor'ayn
