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vax 6.4R: scribe man page

daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Carla Fermann)
Wed Apr 18 15:48:42 1990

To: bugs@ATHENA.MIT.EDU
Date: Wed, 18 Apr 90 15:48:23 EDT
From: Carla Fermann <carla@ATHENA.MIT.EDU>
System name:		MICKEY-MOUSE
Type and version:	MVAX-II 6.4R
Display type:		QVSS

*What were you trying to do?

	man  scribe

*What's wrong:

There are a couple of "non-optimal" statements, and a couple of
formatting oddities.

*What should have happened:

DESCRIPTION
     scribe is a sophisticated text formatting program.  In addi-
     tion to

That "scribe" that starts the sentence isn't capitalized, but later in
the paragraph the word "Scribe" is capitalized when it starts a
sentence. 

     Scribe can produce output files for a variety of devices
     such as the Information Systems Xerox 9700 laser printer and
     SIPB Apple Laser Writer.

Maybe we might want to mention that it can print on Athena printers,
too. 

SEE ALSO
     printers(7)

     Athena documents, Essential Scribe, More Scribe: Report, and
     More Scribe: Thesis.

     SIPB documents, Using the Xerox 9700 from Project and Using
     the Laser Writer from Project

     Scribe User Manual, by Brian K. Reid and Janet H. Walker,
     Third Edition, 1980, Unilogic, Ltd.

These should be updated to reflect the current versions of the
documentation. Also, the "Athena" is missing from the titles of the
SIPB documents.

Also, it should probably mention which version of Scribe you get when
you type "scribe"

*Please describe any relevant documentation references:

The scribe man page  :-)


			Thanks!

					Carla

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