[84] in UA Senate
Re: Updated "Response to Institute-wide Planning Task Force Initial
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Daniel Hawkins)
Wed Oct 14 03:50:08 2009
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Date: Wed, 14 Oct 2009 03:49:47 -0400
From: Daniel Hawkins <hwkns@MIT.EDU>
To: Mike Bennie <mbennie@mit.edu>
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Only one actual typo that I've found so far:
Section 1, pg 2
"These positions pieces were collected by the *principal* officers, who
formatted and edited them for consistency along with writing the
introduction and the overarching issues in order to provide a more complete
picture."
And these are changes that I personally would have made, based on my
preference of how the words flow; they absolutely don't have to be made:
Section 1, pg 1
"Throughout this process, members of the MIT community not on the Task Force
*were able to* suggest or comment on recommendations using the Idea Bank."
Section 1, pg 2
"These feedback mechanisms provided a wealth of *information on how
undergraduates* perceived the recommendations."
-hwkns
On Wed, Oct 14, 2009 at 3:02 AM, Mike Bennie <mbennie@mit.edu> wrote:
> Hey everyone,
>
> The response report has been copy-edited twice more and now includes two
> appendices with the data collected. The report is now available here
> http://web.mit.edu/ua/docs/updated_taskforce_response.pdf. If you have
> additional feedback or if you find a typo, please email me *immediately*.
> I am going to CopyTech tomorrow morning (opens at 8am) to get these reports
> printed for administrators.
>
> Thanks,
> Mike
>
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Only one actual typo that I've found so far:<br><br>Section 1, pg 2<br>=
<div style=3D"margin-left: 40px;">"These positions pieces were collect=
ed by the <b>principal</b> officers, who formatted and edited them for cons=
istency along with writing the introduction and the overarching issues in o=
rder to provide a more complete picture."<br>
</div><br>And these are changes that I personally would have made, based on=
my preference of how the words flow; they absolutely don't have to be =
made:<br><br>Section 1, pg 1<br><div style=3D"margin-left: 40px;">"Thr=
oughout this process, members of the MIT community not on the Task Force <b=
>were able to</b> suggest or comment on recommendations using the Idea Bank=
."<br>
</div><br>Section 1, pg 2<br><div style=3D"margin-left: 40px;">"These =
feedback mechanisms provided a wealth of <b>information on how undergraduat=
es</b> perceived the recommendations."<br></div><br>-hwkns<br><br><br>
<div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Wed, Oct 14, 2009 at 3:02 AM, Mike Bennie <sp=
an dir=3D"ltr"><<a href=3D"mailto:mbennie@mit.edu">mbennie@mit.edu</a>&g=
t;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"border-left:=
1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex=
;">
<div bgcolor=3D"#ffffff" text=3D"#000000">
Hey everyone,<br>
<br>
The response report has been copy-edited twice more and now includes
two appendices with the data collected. The report is now available
here <a href=3D"http://web.mit.edu/ua/docs/updated_taskforce_response.pdf" =
target=3D"_blank">http://web.mit.edu/ua/docs/updated_taskforce_response.pdf=
</a>.
If you have additional feedback or if you find a typo, please email me <b>i=
mmediately</b>.
I am going to CopyTech tomorrow morning (opens at 8am) to get these
reports printed for administrators.<br>
<br>
Thanks,<br>
Mike<br>
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