[89581] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: chIjwI' tIQ bom: 'ay' wej
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Robyn Stewart)
Sun Sep 11 09:55:11 2011
Date: Sun, 11 Sep 2011 06:45:11 -0700
To: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
From: Robyn Stewart <robyn@flyingstart.ca>
In-Reply-To: <BAY166-W5415FAC0DC9FD593BF5F59AA030@phx.gbl>
Errors-to: tlhingan-hol-bounce@kli.org
Reply-to: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
At 23:19 10/09/2011, you wrote:
>jImughpu', jIjatlh:
> > maHaghlaHbe', majachlaHbe',
> > 'oj Hughmaj, meQ je wuS;
> > maQaDtaHvIS matamtaH maH,
> > 'ej DeSwIj'e' vIchopchoHtaH,
> > < vo'wI'! > jIjatlh. jIchuS.
>
>mujang Qov, jatlh:
> > vItI'laHbe' jIH. nuqDaq <'Iw vItlhutlhmeH> vIghoDlaH?
>
>What do you think of this?
>
>maHaghlaHbe', majachlaHbe',
>'oj Hughmaj, meQ je wuS;
>QaDmo' Hoch Hugh, tam! bIQ wIHutlh,
>vaj DeS vIchop, 'IwwIj vItlhutlh!
>< DujHey! > jIjatlh, jIchuS.
The third line doesn't flow quite as beautifully (but my lack of
confidence in my own expertise on stress is the reason I haven't been
commenting on that generally) In exchange it is clearer on all three
points: the thirst-enforced silence, the glorious reason for the
arm-biting and the sighting of the peculiar thing that seemed to be a
ship. muQuchmoH.
- Qov
