[88156] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: How Many of Them Can We Make Die!
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Jeremy Silver)
Tue Aug 10 14:50:51 2010
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From: Jeremy Silver <j.silver@mupwi.demon.co.uk>
To: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
Date: Tue, 10 Aug 2010 19:33:55 +0100
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On Monday 09 August 2010 16:14:47 you wrote:
>
> Editorial comments are encouraged. Suggestions are welcome.
>
> Axes flash, broadsword swing,
>
> pe'chu' yan 'ej SIj 'obmaQ,
My only thought is that {SIj} (slit) conveys too fine a cut to attribute to an
axe. So I reckon {pe} and {SIj} might need to be swapped somehow. Perhaps
consider {chev} for the axe?
mupwI'
