[85516] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: reH ru'Ha' pagh. chut 'oH
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (ghunchu'wI')
Fri May 22 09:00:23 2009
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From: "ghunchu'wI'" <qunchuy@alcaco.net>
Date: Fri, 22 May 2009 08:58:18 -0400
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On May 21, 2009, at 10:12 PM, Brent Kesler wrote:
> I might need to explain some of my decisions, but I'd like to see
> what people think first.
I find no obvious misspellings or outright grammatical errors. It is
understandable. Beyond that, I generally avoid critiquing poetry.
-- ghunchu'wI'
