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Re: KCD 3

daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (David Trimboli)
Tue Jan 22 14:47:16 2008

Date: Tue, 22 Jan 2008 14:44:30 -0500
From: David Trimboli <david@trimboli.name>
In-reply-to: <f5b478ef0801212119y9b46e76m3f40f48f02c61d93@mail.gmail.com>
To: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
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qa'vaj wrote:
> This includes the first decision point.  I tried everything I could think of
> and transcribed what happens for each of the options.
> -- tlhIngan Hol --
> 
> loD moj torghan puqloD 'e' vIbejtaHvIS jupwI' torghan retlhDaq vIQamlaHmo'
> jIbel.

You can't have {-taH} on the second verb of a sentence as object 
construction. Just change the {-taHvIS} to {-DI'} and it works fine.

> puqloDlI'vaD cha'nob vIqempu'

I'd use {-ta'} here. It's not wrong with {-pu'}, though.

> [ghawran:]
> 
> wuqlaHbe'gach! nov qo'nganpu'vaD rop rur!

Reduce {nov qo'nganpu'vaD} to {novvaD}.

"YOU off-worlders" is a little trickier. I usually resort to apposition:

    tlhIHvaD, novvaD, rop rur!

> tlhoy bIQub.
> 
> tlhIngan vIttlhegh wIghaj: bIvangchugh vaj 'uQ DaSop.  bIQubchugh vaj 'uQ
> Damoj.

Does the "official" proverb have {vaj} in it?

I'd use {tu'lu'} instead of {wIghaj}.

> Doch vIjatlhpu'bogh Dayajbe''a'?

How about {qeS} instead of {Doch}?

> <<Dochvam wuqnISlu', Dochvetlh wuqnISlu'.>>

The question isn't what to decide upon, it's which choice to make.

    lugh'a' wIvvam? lugh'a' wIvvetlh?

> yIwuq! wIvlIjmo' qaS Dochmey poH pIm 'e' yIqaD!

I couldn't figure this out at all.

   wIv! wanI''e' qaSmoHbogh wIvlIj DaH tISaHQo'!

> 'a DaH yIwuq!

    'a DaH yIwIv!

> pIch Daghajbe'.  QuptaHvIS tlhInganpu' lughoj.  vay' Daruch 'e' dura'DI'
> loDnI'lI' vay'vetlh Daruch
> pagh bISuvrup.

Erg. I've never been happy with objects on {ruch}, and mixing that with 
the prefix trick... Ick. Anyway, none of that is necessary:

    Dura'DI' loDnI'lI' yIruch!

or as a statement:

    Dura'DI' loDnI'lI' bIruch.

> qoj SoHvaD Ho'Du' 'angchugh be' Da'om
> pagh bangwI' Daghomrup.

Aw, no fun! And far too euphemistic for Klingons. (And didn't you mean 
{banglI'}? Or does Gowron enjoy the swinger lifestyle?)

    pagh Dangaghrup.

> Hoch ghu'vam'e'  vanglu'.
> 
> yIjaH, yInIDqa'.

I wouldn't interpret that "go" literally.

    SuH, yInIDqa'.

> bIrop'a'? bIrIQ'a'? QIt bIvIH 'a nom bIvIHlaHba'.

If we keep the literal "move" here (moving the mouse), how about:

    DolIj DaghurlaHba'!

> ['u' 'uch ghawran, ja':]

{'u'}? "I got the whole world in my hands!" You mean {'oy'naQ}.

> Dochvam qaja'qa'Qo'.

Just {qaja'qa'Qo'}.

 > ghojmeH toy'bogh HaDI'baH yapba' loSlogh. {* not sure
> if I can use this as a noun *}

I wouldn't. What happened to the Pakled?

    loSlogh paqleD'e' Daja' yaj paqleD.

> vay' yIruch!

Just {yIruch} gets the meaning across just fine. So does {yIvang}. If 
you must have an object, try {vay' yIta'}.

> tlhIngan DamojmeH qaghojmoHbe'laHlaw' Human mIwmey vIlo'taHvIS,  vaj DaH
> qaghojmoHmeH tlhIngan mIwmey vIlo'.

The first {-meH} clause is one of those negative-in-the-wrong-place 
kinds, but it makes sense with the next {-meH} clause.

> (ghItDajDaq 'uy 'u' 'er'In.  wovchoH 'u' 'er'In.)

'oy'naQ

> nuq Daruchpu'?

    nuq Data'pu'?

> qhawran 'avwI' le' DaqaD'a'?

How about {QanmeH 'avwI'} instead of {'avwI' le'}?

> nadev Quj 'e' luHechbe', yejquv DevwI' lu'avtaH. SepIch tuq boq DevwI'.
> tuqlIj 'oH, paq.
> bIQuj 'e' yImev.  bIQujtaHDI' QeHna' DaqaD.

    bIQuj 'e' yImev, vay' Damawchu'pa'.

> *DIragh! (pong 'oH?, 'avwI'Daj bot ghawran)

jISovbe'.

> bIghoj 'e' Datagh neH, 'a choqaDqa'chugh vImevbe'.

This need some continuous aspect. It also needs a pronoun to clarify 
(otherwise it sounds like Gowron is willing to stop you from learning):

    bIghojchoHtaH neH, 'a choqaDqa'chugh chaH vImevbe'.

SuStel
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