[151] in Athena_Backup_System
Review of ABS overview doc.
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Bill Cattey)
Mon Dec 18 14:53:57 1995
Date: Mon, 18 Dec 1995 14:53:42 -0500 (EST)
From: Bill Cattey <wdc@MIT.EDU>
To: jweiss@MIT.EDU, athena-backup@MIT.EDU
I have not carefully read the overview doc. These are high level but
important changes I would like to see. (And I am repeating them in
email in addition to having said them in the meeting.)
Change the first sentence to sound more professional...
Add a section "Document Revision History" which will name the original
author as Dianne with the date her rev was accepted, and then yourself
as the next author. (When the requirements appendix gets added, vrt
will get a line in that section...)
Add the Requirements appendix.
A summary of the requirements and a reference to the appendix should
appear VERY early in the doc.
-wdc
