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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] Beginner Story excerpt
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (De'vID)
Fri Jul 4 10:23:37 2014
In-Reply-To: <312D8472-6ADF-40FD-9C54-CAB069BCC37A@flyingstart.ca>
Date: Fri, 4 Jul 2014 16:23:07 +0200
From: "De'vID" <de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com>
To: tlhIngan-Hol <tlhingan-hol@kli.org>
Errors-To: tlhingan-hol-bounces@kli.org
On Wed, Jul 2, 2014 at 10:12 AM, Robyn Stewart <robyn@flyingstart.ca> wrote:
> I'm a little frustrated here. I specifically called out my method of presenting attributed speech for this excerpt as a temporary fix, something I was not presenting for scrutiny, but it's the only thing anyone has commented on.
>
> I wanted to know if beginners found the text readable and if advanced speakers felt I had compromised the language through simplification.
>
> I clearly do have the answer regarding whether it makes anyone want to read more.
I read your story. It was fine. I had no comments. (Actually, I was
going to say that I would've used a V7 in some places, but since you
explicitly stated that wasn't part of the available tools, I didn't
make that comment.)
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De'vID
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