[98674] in tlhIngan-Hol
[Tlhingan-hol] Vows
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Elizabeth Lawrence)
Tue May 27 22:53:57 2014
Date: Tue, 27 May 2014 14:20:54 -0400
From: Elizabeth Lawrence <elizabeth.lawrence08@gmail.com>
To: tlhInganHol discussion group <tlhingan-hol@kli.org>
Errors-To: tlhingan-hol-bounces@kli.org
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I'm working on some Klingon wedding vows, and I'd like a second opinion.
DaHjaj qanay
DaHjaj qaSaw
jIyIntaHvIS bangwI=E2=80=99 SoHtaH
reH qatlhej =E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 vI=E2=80=99Ip
reH SoHvaD jISuv =E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 vI=E2=80=99Ip
reH juHwIj=E2=80=99e=E2=80=99 juHlIj =E2=80=98oH =E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 v=
I=E2=80=99Ip
pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip
reH maQaHchuq =E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 ma=E2=80=99Ip
DaHjaj qorDu' chu' wIchenmoH
I'd like to know if there are any general or grammatical errors, but I also
have some more specific questions. I don't like the phrasing of pIj
maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip, but I wanted a sentiment about laughter, and I
couldn't think of anything better, so any suggestions would be appreciated.
Also, I'm not sure I like the mixture of first and second person, but I'm
not sure how to rephrase.
Thanks,
be''elth
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<div dir=3D"ltr">I'm working on some Klingon wedding vows, and I'd =
like a second opinion. =C2=A0<div><br></div><div>DaHjaj =C2=A0qanay<div>DaH=
jaj =C2=A0qaSaw<br></div><div>jIyIntaHvIS =C2=A0bangwI=E2=80=99 =C2=A0SoHta=
H<br></div><div>reH =C2=A0qatlhej =C2=A0=E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 =C2=A0vI=E2=80=
=99Ip<br>
</div><div>reH =C2=A0SoHvaD =C2=A0jISuv =C2=A0=E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 =C2=A0vI=
=E2=80=99Ip<br></div><div>reH =C2=A0juHwIj=E2=80=99e=E2=80=99 =C2=A0juHlIj =
=C2=A0=E2=80=98oH =C2=A0=E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 =C2=A0vI=E2=80=99Ip<br></div><d=
iv>pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip<br></div><div>reH =C2=A0maQaHc=
huq =C2=A0=E2=80=98e=E2=80=99 =C2=A0ma=E2=80=99Ip<br></div><div>DaHjaj qorD=
u' chu' wIchenmoH<br>
</div></div><div><br></div><div>I'd like to know if there are any gener=
al or grammatical errors, but I also have some more specific questions. =C2=
=A0I don't like the phrasing of pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'=
Ip, but I wanted a sentiment about laughter, and I couldn't think of an=
ything better, so any suggestions would be appreciated. =C2=A0Also, I'm=
not sure I like the mixture of first and second person, but I'm not su=
re how to rephrase.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>be''elth</div></div>
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