[92992] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: [Tlhingan-hol] Schleicher's fable
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (De'vID jonpIn)
Wed Apr 25 13:21:32 2012
In-Reply-To: <6.2.5.6.2.20120424133351.0446a1d0@flyingstart.ca>
Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 19:21:15 +0200
From: "De'vID jonpIn" <de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com>
To: tlhIngan-Hol@kli.org
Errors-To: tlhingan-hol-bounces@stodi.digitalkingdom.org
De'vID:
>> HuDHomDaq Sarghmey legh veD ghajbe'bogh targh'e'. =A0lupDuj 'ugh luHtaH =
wa'.
>> =A0tep tIn qengtaH wa'. =A0wa' lIghtaHvIS loD nom ghoS.
Qov:
> Consider reversing the last sentence to {nom ghoS wa' lIghtaHvIS loD} to
> preserve the parallel structure of the three horses' tasks.
maj. vIlaj.
Qov:
> I think you want {'oy'moH} instead of {'oy'}, or a different prefix in ea=
ch
> case.
You're right. I had that line {mu'aw' mInDu'wIj} stuck in my head
from CK, but instead of {'aw'} it was {'oy'} in my head for some
reason. I'll change it to {'oy'moH}.
Qov:
> "In order for the master to make a shirt that will heat him slightly he u=
ses
> targh fur. And a targ has no fur."
>
> Consider {ghunmoH} instead of {loQ tujmoH} so that I don't have to stop a=
nd
> think if loQ might be modifying something else instead.
I thought {ghun} only applied to food?
-- =
De'vID
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