daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (ghunchu'wI' 'utlh)
Thu Dec 22 13:36:26 2011
In-Reply-To: <6.2.5.6.2.20111221102402.0454adf0@flyingstart.ca>
From: "ghunchu'wI' 'utlh" <qunchuy@alcaco.net>
Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2011 13:35:48 -0500
To: tlhIngan Hol email discussion forum <tlhingan-hol@kli.org>
Errors-To: tlhingan-hol-bounces@stodi.digitalkingdom.org
On Thu, Dec 22, 2011 at 3:08 AM, Robyn Stewart <robyn@flyingstart.ca> wrote:
> Would this story be more interesting to more people if it were in smaller
> pieces and/or included an English translation? Or just if it had more
> fighting and less bureaucracy?
The lack of comments probably has less to do with how interesting it
is than with the fact that it's an original composition and not a
translation of a known work. In addition to mentioning
grammar/vocabulary/typographical issues, I've been making the effort
to find something useful to say about the story, trying to spark
ongoing discussion in Klingon. Alas, it doesn't seem to be working.
> tlhIngan maH
tlhIngan maH!
> bejtaHvIS vajar, qaStaHvIS cha' jarmey Duj Soj QaD neH Soppu' 'e' tlhoj. =
buS
> 'e' nID.
qech vIyajHa'be'chugh, <qIm> lugh law' <buS> lugh puS.
> jatlh Sa', =93...Duj quv tI' tlhIngan wo' 'e' vIchupchugh, lutI'.=94
HoSghaj be'vam.
jIpIHchoH. nobvam Dun nobrupchugh, potlh Hev neHba'.
> jatlhtaH Sa', =93...choyaj'a', vajar HoD?=94
yajchu', qaH!
> yabDajDaq Sa'vaD Qu'mey le' lIqchoH.
<lIq> vIyaj, 'ach <yIr> <gher> joq vImaS.
> pe'vIl jatlh Sa', =93tlhIngan maH!=94
> ja' Hoch Qoybogh beq, =93tlhIngan maH!=94 jeS je vajar.
jeS je yabwIj ghogh.
> "Duj lajlu'pa' vergh'a' QaynIS.=94
mu'tlhegh vIyajbe'. lugh'a'? pe'vIl jIQubqa' neH net poQ'a'? ghaytan
Dach vay' vISovbe'bogh.
> jatlh vajar, =93matlh beqwIj. vIQaypa' vIjatlh.=94
val 'ej may HoDchaj pov.
> QImmey Sopqa' Sa'...
DuqDaq tlhIngan wo' Degh cha'lu''a'? Sulu HoD tu'lum vIqawtaH.
-- ghunchu'wI'
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