[86358] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: pIqaD bom
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Mark J. Reed)
Wed Jul 29 10:15:36 2009
In-Reply-To: <c40.6220ff9a.37a1afe6@wmconnect.com>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 10:14:31 -0400
From: "Mark J. Reed" <markjreed@gmail.com>
To: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
Errors-to: tlhingan-hol-bounce@kli.org
Reply-to: tlhingan-hol@kli.org
On Wed, Jul 29, 2009 at 10:00 AM, <MorphemeAddict@wmconnect.com> wrote:
> Rather than try to squeeze nine letters into the second line, where only
> seven fit, maybe this would work:
The problem there is that if you end the line with {'ot} it doesn't rhyme.
We could maybe compromise with 8 syllables in 7 beats:
'at bay chay Day 'et ghay Hay
'It jay lay may nay ngay 'ot pay
qay Qay ray
Say tay tlhay
'ut vay way yay qaghwI' je
--
Mark J. Reed <markjreed@gmail.com>
