[85444] in tlhIngan-Hol
Re: Klingon Ad for my new novel!
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Dr. Lawrence M. Schoen)
Sat May 16 14:25:15 2009
To: tlhIngan-Hol@kli.org
From: "Dr. Lawrence M. Schoen" <lawrence@klingonguy.com>
Date: Sat, 16 May 2009 14:17:24 -0400
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ghItlh Doq:
> DubtaHba' tlhIngan Hol laHlIj.
Clearly your suffix order error has been included as a test.
Personally, I don't like N-N-N constructions. They feel clunky to me.
I'd have recast this as a complex sentence, thusly:
tlhIngan Hol lo'meH Dubba'taH laHlIj.
Or something similar. Of course, I am not one of the grammarians,
and there may be other errors creeping in that I fail to see.
--Lawrence