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[tlhIngan Hol] We got words for a Spiral,
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (Jeremy Silver)
Tue Aug 8 17:40:11 2017
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From: Jeremy Silver <jp.silver@tiscali.co.uk>
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Date: Tue, 08 Aug 2017 22:40:03 +0100
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This reminds me... now we have words to describe a spiral there's a couple of
quote translations I've been trying that have now become more possible. Let's
see if you can identify them.
mubechmoH ghaH. mubechmoH ghaH 'ej ghaH vIghaj.
ghaH vIjeghpa' *nIbya'* maSmey retlhDaq 'ej *'anta'reS* vertaHbogh
vIHtaHghach'a' retlhDaq 'ej ghe''or qulmey retlhDaq vItlha'!
This one's from a challenge from a few months ago. It's still in a too-close-
to-the original-English form but like this it should be easier to identify:
qIb 'ev tIng mI'rab DeS qa'rI' QatHa'Daq pu'jIn Hutlhbogh 'ej Hopqu'bogh mIch
HachHa'Daq machbogh jul SuD 'ej wov'e' qImHa'lu'pu'bogh tu'lu'.
julvamvo' SochmaH Hut'uy' qelI'qam, bavtaH ramchu'bogh 'ej machbogh yuQ SuD.
ngem yoqmey lutlh bIH yuQvam nganpu' no''e'.
lutlhchu'mo' nganpu'vam 'ej qech QaQqu' bIH mI'mey 'aghbogh 'ej yebDaq
tlhaqmey'e' tuQlu'bogh 'e' luQubmo', maDuqqu'.
So the plan is to make it easier to deal with and more Klingon by tying to
figure out how to split it into shorter, hopefully more verb-based sentences.
Would there be any preferred re-castings I should consider?
Thanks for any opinions or pointers for improvement,
mupwI'
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