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Re: [Tlhingan-hol] mIl'oD veDDIr SuvwI': 19. ghob tIvnISbe'lu'
daemon@ATHENA.MIT.EDU (De'vID)
Tue Dec 1 04:54:49 2015
In-Reply-To: <BAY179-W533B9106C550F79EE8970FAA050@phx.gbl>
Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2015 10:54:28 +0100
From: "De'vID" <de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com>
To: "tlhingan-hol@kli.org" <tlhingan-hol@kli.org>
Errors-To: tlhingan-hol-bounces@kli.org
On 25 November 2015 at 18:19, Rohan Fenwick <qeslagh@hotmail.com> wrote:
> 'o qeylIS lIjlaHbogh pagh, 'o veqlargh je, HIQoychu':
chay' qeylIS, veqlargh je Sov /Middle Georgian/ lut ja'wI'pu' jay'?!
> As always, I welcome questions about the rendition, critique of grammar or
> style, and rotten tomatoes wherever some stupid error deserves them, from
> beginners and po'wI'pu' alike.
I don't know if you're simply following the format of the original
text, but I would recommend for the Klingon text to be broken down
into much smaller paragraphs, for easier reading.
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De'vID
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